Now in the world, many countries have war occurring. Why human has war? Many people died in the war, they died for their county, they died for their family. People always said that war is the only way protect their right, freedom, and their home. They never think about the people killed by them. The people who got killed has family too, maybe they are a father of 3 child. I think people need to understand each other. War is only hurting them self and others. Stop the war, save people, love and peace.
Kit,
ReplyDeletecheck your grammar! Your final statement is inappropriate! This is class work- if anything, what you mean to say is an idiomatic expression, and you HAVE to use it EXACTLY the way it is- you don't.